I think you did great on your blog. But I think you need more voice in the paragraphs. Like saying how you felt about the Plaque or justsayin wow that is interesting.
Great job! but there are some improvments that could be made. First, you could put in more information. And second, if you put more voice into your project then it would be perfect.
Great JoB. But one thing that you can improve about your blog is to add your own voice. You shoot out alot of details. Which is a good thing but if you added in your own voice it would of grabbed more of the readers attention. :) other then that great job!
grat job on all the research but i think that your blog would be better if had another guiding question.
ReplyDeleteI think you did great on your blog. But I think you need more voice in the paragraphs. Like saying how you felt about the Plaque or justsayin wow that is interesting.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! but there are some improvments that could be made. First, you could put in more information. And second, if you put more voice into your project then it would be perfect.
ReplyDeleteGreat JoB. But one thing that you can improve about your blog is to add your own voice. You shoot out alot of details. Which is a good thing but if you added in your own voice it would of grabbed more of the readers attention. :) other then that great job!
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